Tuesday, August 04, 2009

poetic blots :P

I am not a very poetic person nd u'll realise dat after u finish reading this post. My friend Sambi introduced me to acrostic poetry. ( Acrostic poetry: put the letters that spell your subject down the side of your page. When you have done this then you go back to each letter and think of a word , phrase or sentence that starts with that letter and describes your subject. explaination courtesy: Sambi)

So i decided to give it a try nd produced these thought blots :P

Cool
Coming from a lost soul,
Others laugh i say "behold",
Open ur eyes wide nd see,
Look carefully "cool is ME"! :D

Nomad
No place to call my own,
Others believe i have no home,
My soul searches for a place,
Another sacred space,
Distant horizon, where i will be me.


Tough
Tired of all the hardships,
Oblivious to all the gains,
Unguarded are my feelings now,
Guess i'll wait for dat day,
Hopefully i'll be tough again.


Food
Fried, baked, boiled or burnt,
Overcooked, raw or topping overturned,
Oh its all looks fun until someone says
"Dont shy beta, have some more"


By now u must've understood wat i meant wen i said dat i am not a very poetic person.
The only thing remotely poetic in the above blots were dat they were written in black nd blue,
which btw signifies how bruised these words are :P

8 comments:

karan said...

i love the food one
but shy?i`m gonna go for it neways

Unknown said...

u perhaps were not tht poetic but were innovative indeed ..flawless and beautiful were ur creed ..i cd not stop maself stoppin by ur blog nd read read nd read

gayatri said...

@ karan nd josh
thanks thanks, now dat encourages me 2 write a few more of these.

tsk,i think i just heard a cry for help :D


@ karan
:D i couldnt think of nything better hence.

Rajiv said...

Food hmmm ....but seriously gayu poetry should hve rhyme in it eg ; food & Good etc ..Hope u get the idea..

Rohit said...

Gayu....u r not good @ oratory
this i say after reading ur poetry :P

anshul said...

wah wah :D :D

anshul said...

M inspired B-)

Anonymous said...

I havnt read any of ur lines ..as u wrote(warned) tht yu r not poet.. so i take it tht line must be of no sense.. ;)