Right here, contemplating
Spinning a web of thoughts
asking for the must have
and avoiding the have not's
The web is growing bigger
the patience, running out
the result is not within sight
but doubt is something one can do without
the thoughts lie in anticipation
of turning into what they should be
all one can do is spin a web of thoughts
and wait for reality to get trapped in it.
* wrote this poem based on the theory propogated by the book 'the secret' -> you get what you wish for.
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line line :) so true !
liked the poem. especially loved the ending 2 lines....is it something you do consciously ie ensure the ending is the best part of the poem?
btw I would have made the poem more dark...maybe cause all this bing makes me think of Shelob from LOTR :P
But thats where you are different from me Gayu...& its good to be distinct :)
Thanks. well i actually think of the last line first :D so maybe that's why.
u really worship LOTR dont you? :P
LOTR hmmmm....its 'precious' to me (as Smeagol/Gollum would say :P).
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